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I graded Josh’s concept relating to identity.  From what I got it’s about the struggles of amnesia and trying to piece back a person’s life.  I really liked the idea because, as he showed, he’ll be able to do images based on the past and present lives and this contrast would be really interesting.  The navigation layout is fairly linear which would be good for the viewer to compare and contrast different aspects of the person’s life.  However, I feel that it could be improved with some organic navigation because this would also reflect back on the issue of amnesia (i.e the person’s life being all over the place).  He did mention that there would be some hidden links in the pages, so I think this is be a good start.

This is the kind of look that I’m going for that I described in my last post.  It focuses only on the eye area with the masks and the rest if blacked out, but using a gradient.  Where the text is indicates where text will roughly be.  As mentioned in the last post, these would be word from a identity poem/song/something that I’ve come up with relating to identity.