Peer Critique

I graded Josh’s concept relating to identity.  From what I got it’s about the struggles of amnesia and trying to piece back a person’s life.  I really liked the idea because, as he showed, he’ll be able to do images based on the past and present lives and this contrast would be really interesting.  The navigation layout is fairly linear which would be good for the viewer to compare and contrast different aspects of the person’s life.  However, I feel that it could be improved with some organic navigation because this would also reflect back on the issue of amnesia (i.e the person’s life being all over the place).  He did mention that there would be some hidden links in the pages, so I think this is be a good start.

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